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Logged Footage






Interview 1-7 = No to being used.
T S 1-5 = Just Audio.
Background Footage 1-8 = Might be used.
People using technology 1-7 = some being used.
Interview redone 1-7 = Yes to being used.
Outro = Yes to being used

EDL




Rough Edit with Changes I'll Make



The biggest change that I am going to make is cut down the footage to 5 minutes worth of footage, I am also not going to have just footage put next to each other I will add transitions between the clips. I will also add an intro and outro. For sound I might add sound effects but I will definitely add music into my documentary. I might also add a short bit of facts without footage but something in the background that I have made or a short bit of footage I've found online.

Final edit with visuals I Made

Before:


After getting feedback from the one above I decided to add a lot more transitions between my shots in fact nearly every visuals has some sort of transition attached to it. I also decided to change my intro as it was just a phone text on it that stayed for a long time but after getting feedback I decided to improve the intro and I did that by creating another file and creating a glitch effect with the text.

After:




Final Edit with Audio changes I made

Before:



After getting feedback I made a lot of changes to my audio, the main big one was that I cut up the music track on the bottom row as it didn't really fit in with what was being said in the interview so I decided that when the interview with my mum was happening I was going to cut out the music and as you can see below that's what I did. I also changed the volume of some of the audio parts as some were too loud and therefore drowning out the other audio that I had, I did that so that everything could be heard clearly whilst still maintaining a balance in volume so nothing was too loud compare to something else. For my intro music which is the first piece of audio in the documentary I decided to find something that fitted in with modern technology but also if it could fit in with the glitch visual effect I had at the start.

After:



Final edit timeline

 Below is the timeline of my final edit.



Documentary

Below is where you can find my documentary 'Modern Technology has control over us'.




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